“Shh. Don’t worry. Spike his drink with these. It’ll put him to sleep.”
“What if he gets suspicious?”
“It’s a risk you’ve to take or we’ll perish. He’s going to conduct experiments on all the children.”
“I am scared.”
“Don’t be, after he’s sedated, we’ll tie him up and put him in a cage.”
“And?”
“Then someone will go and fetch help.”
“How?”
“There’s a highway on the other side of the woods.”
“How can you be so sure about that?”
“I tried to escape once, remember?”
“Does this mean, we’ll get to go home?”
“Let’s hope the plan works.”
Written for Friday Fictioneers
PHOTO PROMPT © Liz Young
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Desperate times. At least they have a plan. I hope it works.
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I hope that too, Lain. Thanks for the read again.
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Oh, very scary. I hope they’ll succeed. I like how you turned the theme around and let them put the abductor in the cage.
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Thank you for the read :). The cruel abductor should be stuffed in the cage.
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I could feel the tension build as I continued to read your story.
I hope their plan works.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks for the read, Isadora. The plan should work this time hopefully.
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Dear Piyali,
This is a plan that needs to succeed. Nice build of story through dialogue.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh Yes! This plan needs to work at any cost. Thank you, Rochelle. As usual the prompt was a good exercise 😀
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really like that, the advice to tie him up and put him in a cage should be the end off it but we all know through years of watching scooby doo, even when tied up, bad things happen!
Really liked it
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I am glad to find another Scooby Doo fan here :). Thanks for the read 🙂
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oooohhhh, let’s hope their plan works. The devil, as they say, is in the details.
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Yes! Their lives depend on it. Thanks, Anurag.
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Seems like the plan is legit. Hope they get to be free. Nice take on the prompt.
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What about his accomplices? They better factor them in too 😉
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Of course, they all have to pitch in and do their bit 🙂 Thanks for the read, Dahlia.
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Nicely crafted and narrated tale on a topical issue.
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It’s heartening to know that you liked it. Thank you for the read and comment 🙂
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Well done, Piyali. My insides were in knots as the story went along. Let us hope they succeed.
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Thanks, Dale. Their freedom depends on this plan 🙂
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I imagine two young boy discussing the plan in whispers, like young campers after lights out, only this is clearly no “camp.” While the one with the plan seems pretty determined, the other seems doubtful and unsure–I’m worried he’ll spoil the escape somehow. Nice how you make us root for these guys (or girls) in just a few lines of dialog!
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“I imagine two young boys discussing the plan in whispers” This is exactly what I had in mind while writing this story. I am so glad you pictured it just the way I did. Thank you so much 🙂
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Good story, unfolds really well. I hope they get away.
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Thanks, Jilly. Your encouraging comment means a lot to me 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Piyali 🙂
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This piece flows brilliantly.
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Thanks, Lisa 😊
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