The chequerboard on the polished oak table was the first thing she’d noticed while stepping into her grandmother’s spotless living room.
“We’re going to grandma’s and I don’t want to see any of your tricks there. OK?” Her mother had warned her on the way.
However, those 32 exquisitely shaped black-and-white pieces, neatly arranged on a chessboard, fascinated the curious, bushy-haired six-year-old so much that post-lunch when everyone had retired to their rooms, she quietly slid into the living room again.
She was about to move the black rooks with her gleaming eyes when her mother’s voice startled her, “Hermione, didn’t I tell you? No tricks here.”
Written for Friday Fictioneers
PHOTO PROMPT © Jeff Arnold
P.S. I just binge-watched Harry Potter movies with my son, therefore, my mind is little pre-occupied with JK Rowling’s fantasy world right now.
It is really so tempting. First it is so new and nice. Second he has been asked not to.
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Thank you, Abhijit.
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Wow! I loved it. Loved how you introduced the character’s name at the end. I guess I have found yet another Potterhead! 😀
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Thank you, Shweta. I don’t know if I qualify for the Potterhead title, but, I do love a bit of magic in my life 🙂
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I like that this works without having to have the knowledge of Harry Potter (which I don’t have apart from a few of the names!)
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Thank you, Lain.
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Nice how you saved the best bit for last and gave the word trick new meaning.
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Thank you, Jo.
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Whoops! Too tempting for little Hermione. Nicely done, Piyali.
Susan A Eames at
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Thank you, Susan 🙂
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i think mom is such a killjoy. all she has to do is ask her daughter to put every piece back to where it belongs. 🙂
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You bet, that would have been real fun, but mums can be a spoilsport sometimes, right ?
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Lovely imaginative fun piece, Piyali and now I have the old Ella Fitzgerald song “Them There Eyes” running around in my head.
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Thank you, Jilly. The song is playing on my computer as I type this message with a smile on my face.
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Imagine the fun she’d have had if she was interrupted! Delightful
Click to read my FriFic tale!
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Whoops – that should be wasn’t interrupted!
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🙂
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Thanks, Keith
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It would be hard to keep that secret! Fun story with a nice twist.
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Thank you, Miranda. I loved your story too
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It’s all her mother’s fault.. if she hadn’t said anything 😉
And I get the binge-watching… I love all the books and movies.
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I know the mother spoilt the fun for her. Good to see another Harry Potter fan here 😉
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Hermione needs to spend more time with her friends, where she can let her creative instincts fly free. Nice take.
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Thank you, Sandra. She definitely needs to spend more time with her friends to hone her gifts.
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Ah, THAT type of trick. Nice take!
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Thank you
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You’re welcome, Piyali.
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Still a few years left until the truth is presented… when the tricks turn into treats 🙂
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Precisely four more years, because that is the time she would go to Hogwarts. Thank you for the read
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Dear Piyali,
I enjoyed the twist at the end. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle
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Well written, Piyali. I could feel the intenstiy from the mothers warning.
Children always want to touch what they cannot. Nicley unfolded …
Isadora 😎
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Thank you, Isadora 🙂
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Wow, this is awesome! Excellent job done!❤️
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Thanks, CAS. I have been little quiet on WP for quite sometime now but I I’ll return soon. I promise 🙂
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Aww.. Take your time love! Hope all is good? ❤
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All is good, it’s just too much work and my laziness to write more often. But, I am trying to come out if it. Shall be back soon 🤗❤
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