Her eyes ran through the dimly lit room, scrutinising every object. The crumpled silken sheets were frayed at the edges, the satin flowers embroidered on them had lost their sheen; splotches of sweat mixed with dirt collected over the cushioned headboard were in dire need of scrubbing; the faded lampshade on the bedside table had certainly seen better days. The windows, covered with thick dusty curtains, hadn’t been opened for a while, she reckoned. The room needed airing to get rid of the overpowering dank smell.
Her gaze amusingly shifted to the woman’s picture on the wall. She was changing her car tyre. Her hair was neatly coiffed; her outfit- a short fitted onesie with lace stockings clipped on to a garter belt- wasn’t exactly comfortable for a task like this. She scowled at the woman’s choice of clothing.
Her eyes finally rested at the pile of clothes carelessly thrown over the chair next to the window. It belonged to the man who’d accompanied her to this dingy motel room. She’d met him a couple of hours ago in the shady part of the town. His lifeless body, covered with blood, lied next to her in the bed.
Written for https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2018/11/17/sunday-photo-fiction-november-18-2018/
Photo Credit: Susan Spaulding
Whoa, that elevated quickly. Didn’t see that one coming!
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Had to wrap it up in 200 words thus a little too fast paced. Thanks for the read, Shweta.
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Having to stick to a word limit is a challenge in itself. You’re welcome, Piyali!
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🙂
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You saw a seedy motel room and murder, as did I! Nicely done.
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Yes, I couldn’t see anything beyond a seedy motel room
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Great twist! 😀
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Thanks, Dark
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Yikes!
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Hope it wasn’t too bad. I mean I do suck at creating twists in my stories, I know. Thank you for the read. 😊
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Dark and delicious!
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Thank you 😊
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Let me repeat it. Sure, it’s “dark and delicious”!! 🙂
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🙂 hihihi thank you
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You are most welcome, Piyali!! 🙂
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Creepily descriptive. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Susan
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Double murder! She has to solve the mystery. Has she found any clue yet? Mystery thickens!
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Thank you
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So nice!
Just the genre I was about writing on.
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Thank you for the read, Joy. Wishing you success on the story you are working on 🙂
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